Comments for 4writingt4sk's Weblog http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Wed, 23 Jan 2008 08:07:23 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on My Embarrass Story (DESI NURAENI ABUDIN-033581) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/my-embarrass-story-desi-nuraeni-abudin-033581/#comment-35 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 08:07:23 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/my-embarrass-story-desi-nuraeni-abudin-033581/#comment-35 You have good ideas to express in your compositions. You can develop the ideas by, first, making an outline. In the outline you can write anything you think is relevant to the topic. After that you can write the ideas you have. Pay attention to the topic and supporting ideas for the topic. Then you can have your friend help you to revise your composition. To make you familiar with writing, make your own journal. You can write whatever you want there. Keep on writing! ^-^ You have good ideas to express in your compositions. You can develop the ideas by, first, making an outline. In the outline you can write anything you think is relevant to the topic.

After that you can write the ideas you have. Pay attention to the topic and supporting ideas for the topic.

Then you can have your friend help you to revise your composition.

To make you familiar with writing, make your own journal. You can write whatever you want there.
Keep on writing! ^-^

]]> Comment on LOCKED INSIDE!! (NINA ROSDIANA 043444) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/27/locked-inside-nina-rosdiana-043444/#comment-34 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 08:00:09 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/27/locked-inside-nina-rosdiana-043444/#comment-34 You are good at putting forward your ideas in your writing. You write in a good order. The compositions are enjoyable to read. You are good at putting forward your ideas in your writing. You write in a good order. The compositions are enjoyable to read.

]]> Comment on Mez Childhood’s Experience (Vista Mesa Lopa 0704580) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/mez-childhoods-experience-vista-mesa-lopa-0704580/#comment-33 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 07:55:10 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/mez-childhoods-experience-vista-mesa-lopa-0704580/#comment-33 In general, your compositions are good. You have lots of ideas to express in your compositions. However, writing is a process. We cannot stop writing just because we think that the poduct is good enough. Keep on writing. have your friends help you in revising the composition you make. Write your experiences in a journal to familiarize you with writing. Develop your ideas by reading a lot. In general, your compositions are good. You have lots of ideas to express in your compositions. However, writing is a process. We cannot stop writing just because we think that the poduct is good enough.

Keep on writing. have your friends help you in revising the composition you make. Write your experiences in a journal to familiarize you with writing. Develop your ideas by reading a lot.

]]> Comment on embarassing moment(susan amperawati N 0704230) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/17/embarassing-momentsusan-amperawati-n-0704230/#comment-32 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 07:49:59 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/17/embarassing-momentsusan-amperawati-n-0704230/#comment-32 Generally, your compositions are good enough. You write the stories smoothly. However, to keep improving your writing, never stop writing. Keep on writing your ideas. Make a personal journal, so that you are accustomed to express your ideas in writing. Pay attention to developing supporting ideas for the topic and capitalization. Checking the grammar also is suggested. Generally, your compositions are good enough. You write the stories smoothly. However, to keep improving your writing, never stop writing. Keep on writing your ideas. Make a personal journal, so that you are accustomed to express your ideas in writing.

Pay attention to developing supporting ideas for the topic and capitalization. Checking the grammar also is suggested.

]]> Comment on My Childhood (rida hasanah 0706124) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/15/my-childhood-rida-hasanah-0706124/#comment-31 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 07:43:25 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/15/my-childhood-rida-hasanah-0706124/#comment-31 Basically, your compositions are good enough. However, to perfect the skill, here are some things to pay attention to: 1. What a paragraph is 2. What makes a good paragraph 3. Grammar 4. Capitalization and punction 5. Cohesion and coherence Basically, your compositions are good enough. However, to perfect the skill, here are some things to pay attention to:
1. What a paragraph is
2. What makes a good paragraph
3. Grammar
4. Capitalization and punction
5. Cohesion and coherence

]]> Comment on It Is Hard To See My Beloved Person (Triana Soeyono/034365) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/it-is-hard-to-see-my-beloved-person-triana-soeyono034365/#comment-30 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 06:29:40 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/it-is-hard-to-see-my-beloved-person-triana-soeyono034365/#comment-30 That is surely a good tip when you are enceoutering someone you like:-). The ideas you are developing in your compositions are good. However, it is suggested that you ask your friends to read your composition and have his/her comments. Don't let minor mistakes bug the perfectness of your compositions. That is surely a good tip when you are enceoutering someone you like:-). The ideas you are developing in your compositions are good. However, it is suggested that you ask your friends to read your composition and have his/her comments. Don’t let minor mistakes bug the perfectness of your compositions.

]]> Comment on Biography of Eka Rahmat Fauzy (Riana Siti Zahra_0704211) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/06/biography-of-eka-rahmat-fauzy-riana-siti-zahra_0704211/#comment-29 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 06:23:51 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/06/biography-of-eka-rahmat-fauzy-riana-siti-zahra_0704211/#comment-29 Writing something you are familiar with is much easier for you. That is a good thing. It means if you are not well, informed about the topic you are going to write, search for more information for thye topic. That way you can develop your ideas. As a result you will write more words reflecting your ideas on the topic. Writing something you are familiar with is much easier for you. That is a good thing. It means if you are not well, informed about the topic you are going to write, search for more information for thye topic. That way you can develop your ideas. As a result you will write more words reflecting your ideas on the topic.

]]> Comment on My Fore Finger was Sewed/Nova kusumamandasari/0706349 by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/22/my-fore-finger-was-sewednova-kusumamandasari0706349/#comment-28 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 06:12:16 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/22/my-fore-finger-was-sewednova-kusumamandasari0706349/#comment-28 It is not embarassing because you did not really know what it was and what it was for. Related to your pieces of writing, I suggest you to make an outline before you write your composition. There you can list things that you think are important and relevant to the topic. From the list you can see what to be included and what not. After that you can develop your writing in a good order. Start from the topic. Write ideas that support the topic. It is not embarassing because you did not really know what it was and what it was for.

Related to your pieces of writing, I suggest you to make an outline before you write your composition. There you can list things that you think are important and relevant to the topic. From the list you can see what to be included and what not.

After that you can develop your writing in a good order. Start from the topic. Write ideas that support the topic.

]]> Comment on My Childhood’s Experience (Een Erlinah_0704603) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/my-childhoods-experience-een-erlinah_0704603/#comment-27 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 05:59:52 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/my-childhoods-experience-een-erlinah_0704603/#comment-27 Writing based on your own experience makes it easier for you write, doesn't it? I can see that you are more enjoying writing to what you've already known. That is a good thing. When you write something that you are not familiar with, or you don't really know, find more information about it first. Then you can develop the topic. Writing based on your own experience makes it easier for you write, doesn’t it? I can see that you are more enjoying writing to what you’ve already known. That is a good thing. When you write something that you are not familiar with, or you don’t really know, find more information about it first. Then you can develop the topic.

]]> Comment on The Ninja’s Pee (Dita Andanawari-0706184) by Yens http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/31/dita-andanawari-0706184/#comment-26 Yens Wed, 23 Jan 2008 05:47:36 +0000 http://4writingt4sk.wordpress.com/2007/12/31/dita-andanawari-0706184/#comment-26 It is really a good story if you write it step by step. It is suggested that before writing you make an outline first. You write what you want to have in your writing. There you can put things as many as possible. Then, you can see which one should be accounted which one should not. It is really a good story if you write it step by step. It is suggested that before writing you make an outline first. You write what you want to have in your writing. There you can put things as many as possible. Then, you can see which one should be accounted which one should not.

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