Home Alone (Siti Salamah 0704599)
Posted by 4writingt4sk on January 14, 2008
When i was nine years old, it was first time i learned cooking. One day, my mom wasn’t at home. I felt so hungry, but there’s no food in the dinning table. So, i fried some soybean curds, and sausage. But, when i tried to take it away from the pan, my hand hit splash of oil. And then my skin got peel off. I was scream and cry. After several minutes, my mom came home and she was shocked when she saw my hand, and immediately she treated my injury. That experience made me tried to be more carefully to do something.
Yens said
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